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2020海淀高三英语二模作文应用文范文-阳光心态,轻装前行

2020-06-04 09:59|编辑: 谢老师|阅读: 2188

摘要

北京高考在线网站搜集整理了海淀英语作文题目,英语作文主要包含两部分,第一节15分,主要考察活动设计方案;第二节20分,英语园地,看图作文。

6月4日,北京海淀区高三年级进行了2020年北京高三二模测试。海淀首先第二天开考的是英语。目前英语试题已经出炉,北京高考在线网站搜集整理了英语作文题目,一起来看看吧!

2020年北京海淀高三二模英语作文题目

第三部分:书面表达(共两节,35分)

第一节(15分)

假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们班拟开展“阳光心态,轻装前行”的活动,现面向全班征集活动设计方案。请你给你的英国朋友Jim写信,内容包括:

1)介绍你的方案;

2)征求他的建议。

注意:1.词数不少于50;

2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数

看完作文题,非常不喜欢写它,越看越不喜欢,与高考真题作文出题思维差距太大。

该作文也不好操作。“阳关心态,轻装前行”是作文题核心内容,考生必须展现:首先“阳光心态”需要规划方案时,有促进学生良好心情内容;另外“轻装前行”还需要把活动嵌入学习轻松情节。这样一个活动规划,应该需要很多内容,我都没敢写完整,快300单词了,作文这样选材,不合适。高考一百大几十单词,就能够完全展示出,出题者意图。该作文如完整表达,用200词不好控制住。该作文一般思维应该400+。

“阳光心态,轻装前行”需要考生翻译。陷阱。如果有“阳光,轻装”英语对应词汇,将是地道汉语英语。如果去掉汉语思维的比喻词汇“阳关,轻装”,如遇到汉语思维英语水平差些的阅卷老师,会吃亏。

目前作文阅卷,依然汉语思维充斥严重。本届学生考过的模拟题,学生去农村,本应该自然逻辑思维,应该为去助农合理,但是要求学农learn from farmers。法制宣传周翻译为Legal Awareness Week,很地道汉语,无奈。

范文1

Dear Jim,

How are you? I am so happy to share with you my present occurrence during my intensive study as senior three student, which is also a kind of relief to me.

My class has scheduled to launch an activity themed with “Keeping Optimistic and Enthusiastic, and Making Progress with no Mental Pressure”, aiming to create atmosphere to improve our study efficiency for preparing for the National College Entrance Examination at the beginning of July.

Now I am busy scheming an activity, hoping my plan can benefit all of us. My plan is based on a smart phone app where we will organize as a virtual team. You see, we are so absorbed in preparing the crucial national examinations and the epidemic COVID-19 worsens the situation, making many of us in deep worry. After class assignment at home, we may turn to our class group by the smart phone app for leisure. Of course, we must make agreement on time and duration for each of specific activities, such as time for singing which can be in form of singing competition to elect winner of the day by competing for the number of “likes”voted, and cooking demonstration competition on the app and the like. I believe it is very efficient way to enjoy refreshing mood making us energetic for our intensive study.

So I intend to ask you some advice for perfecting my plan. You are welcome to offer your ideas in details for the competition items, competition procedures, and time for using app for the activity. Of course, any of your suggestions is appreciated for bettering my plan.

I am looking forward to your response at your earliest convenience.

Yours,

Li Hua

范文2

One possible version:

Dear Jim,

As the College Entrance Exam is nearing, our class is collecting ideas for an activity aimed to help us stay positive and manage stress. I would like to share mine with you.

The first part of my plan is a lecture on stress management. An expert will be invited to offer us practical tips on that topic. Following the lecture, in a peer sharing session, we can share how we feel with each other. My plan also involves an afternoon of fun sports for everyone. Games like kite flying and fun relay races will be organized to give all students some precious quality time together. The whole class can not only take a break from the tight schedule, but also enjoy moments of accomplishment during the process.

What do you think of my plan? Since you are experienced in organizing extracurricular activities, can you give me some suggestions? Thanks a lot!

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